great artwork... but...
in it's appealing title. it's not so appealing storyline is a turndown.
the art work is fascinating and similar to animations i know of, which can be appealing. but in it's rancid humor i can't say i liked it. i'm sorry. but in any case keep it up. you did strike a chord in how you decided to execute the idea. and most definitely the idea has potential and i surmise it's just in it's "larval" stage and just needs more development. but please don't stop because of the negative reviews.
so nonetheless i give you a 8/10
i believe it's fair.
10/10 for artwork
10/10 for smoothness
10/10 for idea
7/10 for storyline
7/10 for development of idea.
i know my math might be off. but it's just what i want as the overall.
good luck in the future